Sam here! 😀
We’re in the home stretch of NaNoWriMo (seven days left!). To all the writers out there, this is an exciting time. Either you’re frantically trying to catch up, frantically trying to finish, or… frantic. You’re just frantic. Maybe you just completed a draft or are about to complete a draft. And maybe it’s your FIRST DRAFT EVER. Maybe this will be your first novel. Congratulations to you!
What do you do when you finish it?!?
What you don’t do is publish it. PLEASE don’t publish that. Your word-baby needs nurture and care. In this video, I’ll talk about that.
I’m also offering my services to you as a beta/editor for free.
And no worries. I have zero interest in stealing anyone’s story. I have my own style, I write really fast, and I have a real, deep, abiding fear of breaking rules (which includes laws). Furthermore, and this is my arrogance talking, I love my own work more than I would love putting my name on someone else’s.
If you’re interested in having some help, you can email me. My email is on our profile page, but I’ll give it to you here as well: firstname.lastname@example.org. I’m going to want to talk to you a little as a human being before I go ahead and just accept your story, so please don’t just dump your manuscript in my inbox and run. Bonus: practice by sending it with a query letter and I can critique that, too. I have experience with writing them (and being rejected a lot).
Let’s fill the world with great stories and change it for the better. 🙂
OK. Onto the video.
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Sam is in the querying stage!!!
It’s been said that you should never really talk about your rejections. I’m breaking this rule. I promise not to be a jerk about it, but rejection is part of the process and if/when that happens, I’m going to share it with you.
I’m currently refreshing the crap out of my inbox. Agent #1 responds within 2-10 days and it’s been 3. Every time I get a fresh email I completely freak out. Pretty sure my soul drops through the universe. I feel sick and excited and nervous and doubtful and cocky as shit and… small. I feel small.
This is… crazy. I wrote a book. I edited a book. I got it beta’d. I cut more than 70,000 words from it. It’s beautiful. My readers love it. No matter what happens, guys… I already won this game. I’m so pleased. ^_^ Anyway. Enjoy the videos! Thanks for following!
Notice me, senpai.
I DID IT!!!
Tweaking will never end, I don’t think. More read-through. More tweaking. Read again. Tweak again.
But it’s beautiful! ^_^ And it’s finished! And I’m so happy I might faint.
Today I whine about losing half of my job, mope a little, and discuss query letters.
Also, #ZappaTheDipshitDog makes an appearance. She’s my adorable, cuddly puppy who is REALLY dumb. You can follow that hashtag on twitter, if you want. She’ll make an appearance occasionally.
Query Samples: http://www.charlottedillon.com/QuerySamples.html
Writer’s Digest “Successful Queries” series: http://www.writersdigest.com/editor-blogs/guide-to-literary-agents/successful-queries
If you want help with your query/writing, etc… you should join a writing/critique group or make some good friends. If you’d like for ME to help you, I’m open to that. Disclaimer: I’m not published, but I’ll do my best. Also, I won’t go easy on you. XD But that’s what you want, right?
Another lesson I learned early: Get a thick skin. This industry is a nonstop barrage of feedback, critique, and rejection.
Hello, from Vacation Land!!! I know I warned you all about the blog silence (the holidays, Blah blah, etc.). Even so, I still feel like a jerk for neglecting you. Sorry about that. Today I’m going to give you the old fashioned typed out blog, instead of a video. The reason is because I’m in a house full of in-laws and I can’t seem to find a free quiet moment to myself to make a video. As I type this, we’re all gathered in the living room watching “Taken” and I’m multitasking. I do that. Obligatory life update: Christmas is awesome and I love my in-laws. They’re seriously the best mandatory family a girl could ask for. I told my mom and several other random people that my in-laws are exactly what my family would be if they all liked each other and got along. My family tends to be over-dramatic and angry half the time. Brad’s family is just super chill. We got a lot of cash for Christmas. Also, my mother-in-law taught me how to use the sewing machine that my aunt gave me, which means now I can pursue my dream of making fleece Pokemon hats to sell on Etsy and at cons. I’m quite pleased. We also bought a bunch of DVDs and some random gadgets, like an aux cable for my car so I can listen to my iTunes. I JUST learned that I could do this. I’m kind of technologically retarded at times. I don’t even have a smart phone (I prefer not to have such easy access to the internet ALL the time). Speaking of tech-retarded… I just now, as of an hour or so ago, finally got my first Kindle. I have already mastered it and loaded it with free eBooks. I even bought Frankie’s eBook, THE SCIENTIST’S DAUGHTER, which means I can FINALLY read it in its entirety. You should probably go buy that, too.
I learned about this reading challenge for 2015: http://9gag.com/gag/a8bQeNe?ref=android.s.fb
I’m going to give it a try. I’ve been meaning to read more. I’ve neglected reading for too long in favor of other hobbies–writing being one, though I don’t intend to give that up, either. There’s a FB group for the reading challenge if anyone else wants to try it with me.
A lot of my NaNoWriMo friends are also imposing writing challenges for 2015. A page a day, or 1667 words a day, or 5 books by the end of the year. I can handle something along those lines, but holidays and such are going to keep me from daily goals. I’m planning on writing at least one more book in 2015. I think I can manage three, even with editing and all that jazz. I work fast, and setting a goal of three will allow for other commitments and periods of burnout. A good, solid goal, I think, and I have MORE than enough ideas. The damned plot bunnies have been breeding like rabbits, taunting me as I edit.
It’s actually quite disturbing.
Now, on to the actual writing update.
I had set a goal of finishing editing by the end of December. There’s good news and bad news on that front. The good news is… I did it! Yep, I sure did. I got my ducks in a row. Deleted the scenes that needed deleting. Added the scenes that needed adding. Saved a scene that I couldn’t live without but didn’t need anymore. I cut 33,457 words in the first heavy-handed revision. 159,043 down from 192,500. That is no small feat. I’ve never cut that many words from a story in my life. In fact, I had expected to add about 20,000 words and delete about 15,000 words for a net gain of 5,000. I’ve surprised myself, and I’m quite proud. Cutting words isn’t really something I enjoy doing.
The bad news is, I still have a long way to go. The typical goal for a debut fantasy author is 90-120K. 159K isn’t TOO far over, so if it turns out I can’t cut any more than what I have, I’ll take it. I believe in my story. I also find solace knowing that Pat Rothfuss’ debut novel is 255K. I’m no Pat Rothfuss, but it gives me hope. That tells me that a bloated word count is NOT an auto reject for every agent. It also tells me that if my writing is good enough, someone out there will take a chance on my word count. That means I can either cut words or improve them if the rejections start to stack up. I can live with that. I’m in this to write quality works, anyway. If it’s shit, I don’t want someone to publish it. These are words I will never be able to take back. I don’t want to cringe when I see them again in 10 years.
As a side note, I find it ironic that I’ve trained myself to stretch my word count to what I consider the proper length for a novel (400-800 pages) only to be told time and time again that the upper limit for a novel should be 120K (about 400 pages). Such is life I suppose. Apparently only the cool kids are allowed to write long books, and I’m still too n00bish. *sighs dramatically*
There’s more good news, though. Last night on Twitter (ATTENTION: Writers who are following our blog who are STILL not on Twitter, you’ll want to pay VERY CLOSE ATTENTION to what I am about to say), I was having a conversation with another author about our main characters. We were comparing sassy heroines (I was talking about Heike) and I mentioned that I’d love to share my MC with her. We got to talking about our genres and what we were working on and such and I mentioned my word count issue. She sympathized and offered to have a look at my first chapter, offering to point out where I could cut words or what I could do in general to improve.
The answer to this question–if it’s a reputable source–is ALWAYS yes. When someone who knows what they’re doing offers a free and friendly critique, take that. So, I sent her my first chapter. The moment I made the decision, I felt sick to my stomach. Sharing my work is always terrifying. This is heart and soul and months of work. Sharing it with a person makes me feel vulnerable. It’s scary! But I knew I needed it, and this author doesn’t know me personally. I took it as a valuable opportunity, and mailed off my chapter one.
A day later (WOW FAST!), I got this:
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In this one I talk about how Twitter is unexpectedly amazing and exceeds my expectations, particularly when it comes to these silly one-tweet pitch contests like PitMad and SFFPit.
I also discuss how Frankie and I seem to have settled on different publishing goals and where we are at with that. 🙂
Information can be found here:
Also, I promised to explain the Senpai meme. I’m an anime nerd and things like this amuse me. 🙂
Did senpai notice me today?
Editing. Betas. Ugh. UGH. I haven’t even had it difficult yet and I’m already faceplanting. I know why. I’m burnt out from the story. I spent too much time on it, too much time with it, and I don’t even want to look at it right now. It’s not my betas’ fault, and though I reiterate it at least twice in this video, I will say it again: I TRULY appreciate my betas, even the really harsh ones that I have not even begun to subject myself to.
Just to be clear, though, here’s what I am looking for when I am asking for a beta:
- Point out where you get confused. This is a good flag that I might confuse others.
- Point out awkward wording. If it reads uncomfortably or potentially offensive, let me know.
- Tell me if a character is acting oddly. If a character is seemingly out of character (and there doesn’t seem to be a reason for it), let me know.
- Let me know if something is too much or too little. Am I using 100 words when I only need 25? Does something feel unnecessary or lacking?
- Make suggestions! Let me know if you get a really good idea that would fit well, even if that means nixing an entire arc of the story.
- Think like an agent/publisher. Does the first sentence/paragraph/chapter grab you? Ask me challenging questions, tell me if my work is too cliche or sounds rehashed from another work, make me defend myself.
- Insult me
- Share my work with others.
- Be all praise or all criticism: I crave balance in all things. I need critique, but if all you have are negative criticisms I’m just going to feel beaten down. Tell me what strikes you positively, too. On the other hand, I love praise, but if you don’t point something out I’ll see you as a fangirl/fanboy and not a beta. I need your help, not your worship.
- Reimagine my story. I’ve written it this way for a reason… don’t redirect me unless my work is complete shit. And if you think it’s complete shit, we probably shouldn’t be working together in the first place.
That said, it should also be noted that I am writing in what’s called “Third Person Limited” POV, which means that the words you read when you read the story are narrowed by the perceptions of the character you’re following. If Myen sees something and misinterprets it, she’s wrong, but she will believe she is correct. Therefore, that thing will always be misrepresented in her chapters according to how she sees it.
Keep in mind, too, that if something seems incomplete or confusing, I might have done it that way on purpose. I’ve been trying to write more purposefully vague, to reveal things later. I don’t want you to be so disoriented that you feel you need to stop reading, but I do want you to be unsure of certain aspects.
A suggestion for writers who are utilizing beta readers, based on this experience:
Give your story to your beta reader, make sure it’s clear what you expect of them, and don’t read a word they’ve suggested until they are finished and hand it back. Then, thank them for their input and guidance, profusely, and choose to use or deny whatever you see fit. Start conversations with them on points you’d like to discuss in more detail. Don’t breathe a word otherwise.
My two cents. I think I’m going to do that from now on.
On to the vlog:
I was floating around on Twitter and Patrick Rothfuss tweeted this opportunity to participate in a Q&A with Seth Fishman (agent and author) about query letters and agents. This is incredibly important stuff if you’re planning on publishing through the traditional channels (getting an agent, submitting manuscripts, etc).
In lieu of posting my own update, I’ll share this. It’s a REALLY long video (~1 hr), but if this is important to you, it’s worth it.
I’ll post my thoughts on it tomorrow.